Published November 30, 2007
The sun will rise
Upon the East
The time will come
To laugh and feast
A cloud will pass
Bringing rain
An introduction
To fear and pain
The water darkenss
With demise
But in the suffering
Allies arise
Treachery comes
From within
Creating Hatred
Between our kin
There's soon a time
For needed peace
The silent egg
Before the beast
The door opens
Evil will wake
A weapon found
Hell will break
Empires will rise
Punishing all
But light will shine
The shadows fall
Old friends appear
With older foes
Warning us
Of magical woes
And finally
The sun will set
But when it does
There will be no regret
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I really liked it
Grate work!
I really like that type of poetry... It flows well!
-Cheers!
Genevieve
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